Script Consultation Services

Your consultation will clarify how to better develop your script towards a truly exceptional emotional experience for your audience.

How can you improve how well your story is being told?

What changes can be made to more effectively serve the goals of your script and your career?

Your constructive and practical feedback will discuss:

  • The journey of your characters throughout the story and how an audience might emotionally connect and identify with them in the most powerful way
  • How dialogue carries information regarding character, context, history, and environment
  • The level of originality in every aspect of your story
  • The credibility and logic of your plot
  • The execution of effective conflict
  • The consistency of your screenplay’s tone
  • How well the description of the story’s action functions within the script

Ultimately, your consultation will provide clear actions you can take to improve your script.

Services

You can receive your script consultation in two ways:

1. Written notes, along with a followup on the phone or Skype.

2. One hour Skype/phone session with no written notes provided.

All services have a 72-hour turnaround. 

Feature (70-125 pages)

3-4 pages of written feedback, followed by an optional phone/Skype session.

Fee:  $295

One hour phone/Skype session.

Fee: $195

Pilot Hour (50-80 pages)

2-3 pages of written feedback, followed by an optional phone/Skype session.

Fee:  $175

One hour phone/Skype session.

Fee: $125

Pilot Half (25-50 pages)

2-3 pages of written feedback, followed by an optional phone/Skype session.

Fee:  $125

One hour phone/Skype session.

Fee: $100

Short (1-30 pages)

1-2 pages of written feedback, followed by an optional phone/Skype session.

Fee:  $100

One hour phone/Skype session.

Fee: $75

Developmental Consultation

Do you have an outline, treatment or developmental material you’d like to be reviewed? Please contact us to discuss.

After we’ve received your registration and payment, we will contact you for a copy of your script.

Please let us know if you have any questions.

Thank you!

Note: Screenplays that have been consulted by Gordy Hoffman are not eligible for submission to the BlueCat Screenplay Competition.

Script Consultations

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